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#81

Post by CaptHayfever » Wed Sep 08, 2010 2:40 am

^I would just circle the camera around the actors during the take. Keeps the audience informed, gets me both views I wanted, AND gets me a kinetic shot, which I enjoy.

And remember, "I'm-a Luigi, number one!"

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Post by Bomby » Wed Sep 08, 2010 5:37 am

I like to put the camera directly on the line and do 180 flips back and forth between the characters with symmetrical planimetric framings. Or just have it all in one long static shot from an interesting angle and maybe move into the 180 flips on the line.

But wait, we're supposed to be talking about a comic here, aren't we?

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#83

Post by Valigarmander » Wed Sep 08, 2010 8:18 am

She should keep pulling until she gets a frowning vegetable.

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#84

Post by Antisocial » Thu Sep 09, 2010 1:33 am

POOF! Dignity's gone!

Wow. I'm learning so much. I didn't even know about facetables.

So the perspective switched to the back on the last panel, eh? That was actually intentional, because 1: I didn't want to confuse the issue on Lybra's height because she's much shorter than portrayed there, so I switched to show her on a stool. 2: It was easier to draw the giant fairy on the left side so my drawing hand had something to rest on. Also, positioning her word balloon was easier, so I didn't have to draw long-ass, winding spikes to the balloons. I hate it when that happens.

But I wanted to draw the first two panels showing the character's front, just so I could draw the face. Drawing backsides is kinda boring.

...So, yeah.

...

^^ ...What? Comics? OH RIGHT--the comic.

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#85

Post by New! Tazy Ten » Thu Sep 09, 2010 3:01 am

I told you all Michel was top tier.

Also, I enjoyed the comics so far. Good job.

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#86

Post by Valigarmander » Thu Sep 09, 2010 8:16 am

I've got to try that sometime...

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#87

Post by Antisocial » Thu Sep 09, 2010 3:04 pm

Had a couple of extra characters in concept art left lying around. Why not use them?

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Post by Jere » Fri Sep 10, 2010 8:09 am

Before anyone ask, no Karameldansen is not the song of choice on the hip clubs in sweden
Beep Boop absolutely not a bot!

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Post by Valigarmander » Fri Sep 10, 2010 8:18 am

^ It's Eva's Polka, isn't it?

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Post by Jere » Fri Sep 10, 2010 12:44 pm

No that's finland, or when i get drunk on koskenkorva and decides to try to be finish
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#91

Post by Rainbow Dash » Fri Sep 10, 2010 2:38 pm

what's the name of the school again? is there a pun in the sports team name?

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Post by Antisocial » Fri Sep 10, 2010 3:58 pm

A face only a mother could love.

^ Most of the wacky hijinks occurs at the Soprano School District, part college, part high school. Other city schools include Contralto University and Treble Elementary. See the pattern?

...They all end with vowels.

The Barbarians used to belong to one of the city's basketball teams, the Bastaku Barbarians, but after their 67-game losing streak, they realized they sucked and let another team take over, with a new name. One of the original losers took the old name to Soprano. They fared better with it.

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Post by New! Tazy Ten » Fri Sep 10, 2010 5:43 pm

He's PUNCHtastic.

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Post by Antisocial » Sat Sep 11, 2010 7:07 pm

It should really be a song that you HATE.

I've been busy practicing drawing bodies lately. Such a shame I really can't show it here.

Isn't censorship wonderful?

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Post by Cravdraa » Sun Sep 12, 2010 9:23 am

Just sticking my head in here to say I enjoy your comics.
Also your host seems to be down at the moment. :p

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#96

Post by United Nations » Sun Sep 12, 2010 1:41 pm

^^Omgsh, that is so me. Ducktales theme song. You can't answer or the music will stop! If you don't answer, you miss an important phone call. Catch 22!

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Post by Antisocial » Mon Sep 13, 2010 2:27 am

Sadly, such a collection does not exist in real life.

^^ Thanks. Admittedly, it's always a shock to me when some people post in my thread, and I'm all like, "Whoa--YOU read my crap??" Also, site's back up. Whoo.

^ Thank god I'm capturing some amount of realistic idiosyncrasies and not just making **** up.

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Post by Rainbow Dash » Mon Sep 13, 2010 9:21 am

...Luizi?

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Post by Antisocial » Mon Sep 13, 2010 7:00 pm

Nothing's better than these comics!

^ Yeah. I know you're all sitting back incredulously, thinking "...Really?", assuming it was a lame attempt at finding a counterpart to Luigi. It was. I made it up. Imagine my surprise when I found out later that it actually exists as a name.

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#100

Post by Rainbow Dash » Mon Sep 13, 2010 7:46 pm

Oh man you should do something special for your 10000th post.

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